MODULE 1 | Lesson 6 – Exercice 1
Indication :
Vous allez découvrir un e-mail en anglais.
- Lisez l’e-mail tranquillement. Vous n’allez peut-être pas tout comprendre, et c’est normal. Vous pouvez écouter les fichiers audios en complément.
- Ensuite, répondez aux questions. Si vous n’arrivez pas à répondre à certaines, relisez ou réécoutez autant de fois que vous le voulez l’e-mail.
Attention : la diction de Dave est ici à vitesse réelle. Il est donc normal que cela ne vous semble pas facile.
Bonne chance !
L’e-mail :
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Dear Mr Smith,
Special offer for you
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Thanks for your recent order. We are delighted to have you as a customer.
You will find your receipt enclosed. Your invoice will be in the package that will be shipped to you next week.
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As of now, I, Michael Jordan, will be your account manager. Should you need anything, you can give me a call at this number : 1 888 000 22. Please note that I will be on vacation next week. Mrs Zepplin will be available to you as my replacement.
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Moreover, our new catalog will be released on May the 1st. I will send you 3 printed copies for you and your colleagues. In this new edition we have also included our brand new range of seamless pipes. I know you saw them in our factory last week. And I wanted to make sure that you know they are available for order. The first customers that have started using these pipes have been able to grab market shares that were not available to them before. This new technology and line of products open new opportunities for clients like you. As we’ve received many pre-orders, be sure to tell us what you need in advance.
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To thank you for your business, I’m happy to tell you that you are entitled to a 10% discount on your next order. The only requirements are for your order to be above €10.000 and to be recorded in our system before the 1st of June. I was able to get you this 10% discount on the new seamless pipes also. And as usual there are no shipping fees above €10.000.
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Last but not least, we have organized a free webinar next week, on Tuesday at 3pm. We will present two case studies of clients like you. We will explain how they have managed to grow their business with seamless pipes. I sincerely think that you should attend this as I’m sure you are trying to seize similar opportunities.
You will have the opportunity to ask any questions you may have during the webinar.
If you are not able to watch it, I’ll make sure that you receive a replay.
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Again, many thanks for your business.
If you need anything, please let me know.
Fichier audio paragraphe 7 de l’email
L’audio complet de l’e-mail :
Afficher la traduction du mail (une fois que vous avez fini l’exercice)
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Dear Mr Smith,
→ Cher Monsieur Smith,
Special offer for you
→ Une offre spéciale pour vous
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Thanks for your recent order. We are delighted to have you as a customer.
You will find your receipt enclosed. Your invoice will be in the package that will be shipped to you next week.
→ Merci pour votre récente commande. Nous sommes heureux de vous compter parmi nos clients.
Vous trouverez votre reçu en pièce jointe. Votre facture sera dans la colis que nous vous expédierons la semaine prochaine.
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As of now, I, Michael Jordan, will be your account manager. Should you need anything, you can give me a call at this number : 1 888 000 22. Please note that I will be on vacation next week. Mrs Zepplin will be available to you as my replacement.
→ À partir de maintenant, moi-même, Michaël Jordan, serai votre chargé de compte. Si vous avez besoin de quoi que ce soit, appelez-moi à ce numéro : 1 888 000 22. Merci de noter que je serai en vacances la semaine prochaine. Madame Zepplin sera à votre disposition et me remplacera.
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Moreover, our new catalog will be released on May the 1st. I will send you 3 printed copies for you and your colleagues. In this new edition we have also included our brand new range of seamless pipes. I know you saw them in our factory last week. And I wanted to make sure that you know they are available for order. The first customers that have started using these pipes have been able to grab market shares that were not available to them before. This new technology and line of products open new opportunities for clients like you. As we’ve received many pre-orders, be sure to tell us what you need in advance.
→ De plus, notre nouveau catalogue sera disponible le 1er mai. Je vous enverrai 3 copies papier pour vous et vos collègues. Dans cette édition nous avons aussi inclus notre toute nouvelle gamme de tuyaux sans soudure. Je sais que vous les avez vus dans notre usine la semaine dernière. Et je voulais m’assurer que vous sachiez qu’ils sont disponibles. Les premiers clients qui ont commencé à utiliser ces tuyaux ont été capables de prendre des parts de marché qui ne leur étaient pas réservées auparavant. Cette nouvelle technologie et gamme de produits ouvrent de nouvelles opportunités pour des clients comme vous. Comme nous avons reçu beaucoup de pré-commande, assurez-vous de nous faire part de vos besoins en avance.
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To thank you for your business, I’m happy to tell you that you are entitled to a 10% discount on your next order. The only requirements are for your order to be above €10.000 and to be recorded in our system before the 1st of June. I was able to get you this 10% discount on the new seamless pipes also. And as usual there are no shipping fees above €10.000.
→ Pour vous remercier de votre fidélité, je suis heureux de vous annoncer que vous bénéficiez d’une réduction de 10% sur votre prochaine commande. Pour en profiter votre commande doit être supérieure à 10 000 € et être enregistré dans notre système avant le 1er juin. J’ai réussi à vous faire bénéficier de cette réduction aussi pour les nouveaux tubes sans soudure. Et comme d’habitude il n’y a pas de frais de port au-dessus de 10 000€.
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Last but not least, we organize a free webinar next week, on Tuesday at 3pm. We will present two case studies of clients like you. We will explain how they have managed to grow their business with seamless pipes. I sincerely think that you should attend this as I’m sure you are trying to seize similar opportunities.
You will have the opportunity to ask any questions you may have during the webinar.
If you are not able to watch it, I make sure that you receive a replay.
→ Dernière des choses et non des moindres, nous organisons un webinar (un télé-séminaire) gratuit la semaine prochaine, mardi à 15h. Nous présenterons 2 études de cas de clients comme vous. Nous expliquerons comment ils ont réussi à faire croître leur business grâce aux tubes sans soudure. Je pense sincèrement que vous devriez y assister car je suis certain que vous souhaitez saisir des opportunités similaires.
Vous aurez l’opportunité de poser toutes vos questions durant le webinar.
Si vous n’avez pas la possibilité de le regarder, je ferai en sorte que vous receviez la rediffusion.
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Again, many thanks for your business.
→ Une nouvelle fois merci de votre fidélité.
If you need anything, please let me know.
→ Si vous avez besoin de quoi que ce soit, n’hésitez pas à me le faire savoir.